Date: May 17, 2026
Location: Cream & Amber, Hopkins
Prompt: Write a piece mostly composed of dialogue, with your characters discussing the weather.
“I hate this weather.”
“Well, you weren’t complaining when we first got here.”
“When we first got here, we were in Miami. Now we’re in this shack on stilts in the middle of one of the biggest swamps in the world, there are alligators, and the air is dripping.”
“You told me you liked Florida.”
“Maybe I liked the idea of Florida. I liked Miami just fine. But you’re the genius who chose to move us into a tropical swamp.”
“I didn’t choose it. This is the only location on Earth where this particular species has been sighted. And–”
“I know, I know. If you’re going to have a chance at publishing it, you have to find it. But you dragged me along with you, into the armpit of America, to try to find a flower the size of a toddler’s thumbnail that might be living somewhere within 2 million acres of swamp, and the air is dripping, so please forgive me if I’m having a little trouble coping. It’s been a lot of change for me.”
“It isn’t just a flower, it’s an orchid that was thought to be extinct for over fifty years…”
“Did you even hear what I said?”
“I know you don’t love change, but this is a very important opportunity for me, and I really want to see if I can narrow down possible habitats before hurricane season.”
“Hurricanes…”
“Well, yes. We are in Florida.”
“…”
“Hurricanes are to be expected.”
“Do you… do you think our shack on stilts is going to manage through a hurricane?”
“Well, I suppose we will find out in about a month or so.”
“Do you mind if I sit here?”
The strange voice immediately shifted the air, a sudden heavy stillness matched the sinking pit in her stomach.
Without looking up from her book, she moved as far to the edge of the bench as she could while avoiding an undignified fall into a pile on the grass.
He sat. She turned the page. The stillness persisted, then:
“What a peculiar day for a storm, don’t you think?”
“What?” She wasn’t sure she’d heard correctly.
“What a strange day for the storm that’s coming.“
“There are no clouds.” She couldn’t help herself. It was 75 degrees and sunny. She heard a chuckle, deep and rumbling.
“I didn’t say it would be a rainstorm, did I?”
“What kind of storm do you expect?”
“Oh, I think it’ll be a surprise for everyone. Something no one expects, least of all me.”
“I’m not sure I’m understanding you.”
“I don’t believe you’re supposed to. Not yet.”
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